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Writer In The Making – The Civil War

October 20, 2009

Andrew came home with this story. It is so clever! I just had to share. (Nothing was changed)

As written by Andrew Kusleika age 10

ice-cream

The Civil War

“Oh no” I thought as soon as the ice cream civil war erupted. Chocolate was defanantly beating Vanilla , but vanilla was still strong. Vanilla and chocolate never liked each other.

Strawberry usually separated them, but strawberry was extinct which forced chocolate and vanilla to live together. That’s when the war erupted. It is the biggest war in ICE CREAM HISTORY!

The war was also the longest war too. It lasted 24 ice cream days. Chocolate won the war but they had help from the eater. (human)

It was still hard for Chocolate because vanilla had the flying donuts on their side. The weapons is what really won the fight for chocolate. Their best weapon was the Spoonsuka.

The chocolate surely won. Their was many deaths to both sides. Vanilla went extinct and chocolate lived happily ever after.

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2 Comments leave one →
  1. Debbie permalink
    October 20, 2009 7:46 am

    He has the same talents as his parents. Nice Job Andrew!

  2. October 21, 2009 7:41 am

    Love it!

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